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Just About To Break... by poetoffire Just About To Break... by poetoffire
Something's getting in the way
Something's just about to break
I will try to find my place
In the Diary of Jane...


THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR 500 PAGEVIEWS!

In honor of that, I present to you my interpretation of Breaking Benjamin's Diary of Jane.

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Gracies-Stock Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2008
Cool work :) Thankyou very much for using my stock :+favlove:
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teenyxtinyxtina Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I love Breaking Benjamin :)

I think that the lighting and the atmosphere can be improved by making the left side of the book darker, creating a shadow that is caused because of the source of light. So everything closer to the light is lighter and everything farther away would be darker (just like you did the lighting for the model, now apply it to the other side of the picture)

Hope that makes sense :D
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poetoffire Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008
I'll try that. Thanks.
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irinama Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008  Professional
Amazing composition...beautiful work.
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:iconpoetoffire:
poetoffire Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008
Thank you.
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Ordinary-Stock Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008
Thanks for using my stock in this nice work!
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The-Greenie-Fire Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008
Heh, well congrats on 500 pageviews xD

This looks AMAZING yet again; as can be expected from the one and only Poet of Fire.

You should have a kiriban for 1,000 pageviews, then.... Butyes. Stunning work 8D
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poetoffire Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008
'Course I will! When I get to that point...which might be in a long, long time...
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:iconthe-greenie-fire:
The-Greenie-Fire Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008
...I'll go keep viewing your page, then xD

Awesome, though. Keep up the awesome work, and you'll start getting pageviews like crazy.
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poetoffire Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008
That what happened to you?
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:iconthe-greenie-fire:
The-Greenie-Fire Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008
Yeah, the first little while I didn't really get many pageviews (and hell, you're getting them faster than I did!) but once you get people seeing your art andsuch, your pageviews will rocket ;]
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LadyMoreadiel Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008
again wow..
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poetoffire Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008
Because 'wow' works for anything, yes?
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